DURHAM — Durham residents looking forward to the long-anticipated completion of Durham's Martin Luther King Jr. Parkway will have to wait just a little longer.
In addition to using "Durham" too often, the lead is a wordy tease. How much longer? The story gets around to answering that question three paragraphs later:
Officials said Monday the project should finally be complete by next month.
This pyramid isn't inverted well. But rather than structuring this story that way, why not present it as a Q&A? Start with an introductory paragraph and then provide the answers to the questions that readers are asking:
- Why is the road delayed?
- How long has it taken to build?
- When will it open?
- Who's doing the work?
- How much will to cost?